Paramedic Method

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Instructions

Choose a paragraph from your rough draft of your analysis and revise it using the paramedic method. Your journal must show the paragraph as you originally wrote it and the revised paragraph. I suggest using the Track Changes function in the Review tab of Microsoft Word (Track Changes is a great editing tool), so that I can see your changes.

Guidance

The “Paramedic Method” is a name given to a technique for concise writing. You can read about it on the Purdue OWL (Online Writing Lab). But essentially it’s a way to identify and fix bad syntax, bad punctuation, blatant redundancies. You simply read your sentences and ask yourself if they make sense, and, if not, how they could make sense given the way you’ve written them. Basically, it’s revision.

While there is a step-by-step process for this technique, as defined by the Purdue OWL, you can use the technique however you want. The important thing is that you closely revise one paragraph, so that you then have a model for how to revise other paragraphs in the paper.